Well i keep on making stupid mistakes and was wondering if anyone could point out any grammatical errors in the following essay preferably any run-ons and fragments.
Albert Einstein, one the smartest people in history, had died still studying now that’s some dedication. Dedication is what gets people out of their beds in the morning. It is the feeling of getting that A+ on that last test. Dedication can also show beauty, change and even economic value.
An example of beauty is like a caterpillar becoming a butterfly. The caterpillar has to fight off enemies for its survival. Eventually, through dedication it will sprout into a beautiful butterfly. Dedication can show beauty through the evolution of animals in nature.
Along with beauty dedication can also bring economic value. The Mona Lisa, by Leonardo da Vinci, is one of the most admired pieces of art. The mystery of the picture has people go insane over it. It has a value of seven hundred million dollars. This is an example of how dedication can display economic value. Leonardo did not just draw this over night; he took his time. Through dedication, the Mona Lisa has become one of the most valued piece of art.
Dedication has also brought change to the world. Recently, in Egypt the ruler, Mubarak, had gone crazy with power. His people no longer wanted him in power. The Egyptian people stood in protest on the streets for fourteen days. The people in the streets would not stop until justice was served. Eventually the ruler, Mubarak, had given in and agreed to back down. This displays that dedication can show change. Through dedication the people of Egypt had been able to make a change.
Dedication is giving something your all, and sticking to it. Dedication can be expressed through many different ways. Things like painting, protesting, and just growing over all are all part of what dedication really is.
So can anyone help?
Do you think this guy with a God Complex likes individual rights types, digs Republicans? Think he’s a big US Constitution fan? IS THIS A TEA PARTY TYPE GUY?!!!! lol
This is a typical World Banker, big government, control of the people guy … how does that gel with the Progressive picture of a Socialist? You know, like Sweet ol Goergy Schwartz? (George Soros) who’s father gave up the Jewish faith for the cult of Esperanto? The One World order cult with it’s own special language which Soros and a few hundred others speak fluently?
He fits in with Soros, guys like Geithner who is to important to get busted for tax cheating like the little people. Guy’s like John Holdren who find ways to make government more powerful by telling the mass of idiots an ice age will destroy them if they don’t give government power and big money, or then he switches to Global Warming with the same cure, give power and money, join a one world government & become a serf to the important people like Kahn, Soros, ect …
These super rich elite, how do Republicans get labeled as what these Socialist / One World Order guys really are? The guys who will rape without conscience, steal billions without guilt, enslave people without pity for them? Who basically think the commoners are put here to serve and pleasure their whims? To use as live stock?
See, these people, the World bankers in the IMF & World bank run in a circle of like minded scum with God Complexes, you know as George Soros describes himself & he’s definitely in … they bribe world leaders like Obama to give them money for helping them get into office (you know all the money Obama got from Europe and the Middle East? The illegal contributions no one bothered about? well that’s because that kind of money buys a LOT of corruption) Then for that help to get into office and basically be made for life in extreme wealth, Obama gives billions to their organizations like the IMF and their businesses, bail outs. The IMF takes those billions and gives them to despotic leaders often, and they take the money and obligate the people to pay it back. I mean how did Arafat become a Billionaire while his people were dirt poor living off the US and Israeli contributions? Mubarak? Qaddafi? So many others? Because it’s a scam to buy power is why, they buy those people. The world bank loans money to despots and they many times forced their farm land into food production for export where people could pay for it … result? The people starve while their food is sent away to richer people. Mao pulled that one, these scum really love to study Mao. So do Obama’s advisers, and he got a place on the Obama White House Christmas tree, biggest mass murderer in history, how nice huh? But that was just unimportant commoners he mass murdered by the 100s of millions. no big deal!
The thing is, the money behind Progressives, behind Harvard and other Elite colleges, comes largely from the same places Obama got his huge contributions. Friends of Kahn and Soros, Fabian Society, the Rich Arabs who created Medrasas schools (where it’s cool to be a martyr and murder for 72 virgins when you go to Paradise for killing innocent infidel babies) fund our Colleges and pretty much direct the information flow. Not all at once, but over time they have, the results have alarmed former Communists like Horowitz who can’t even get back into his own Alma mater to speak, but Acne mini Jihad can (crazy 12er President of Iran who wants to bring on the 12th Emom by destroying the world with war).
See, these people are different in their thinking than you. You can’t understand them. Corruption is just business, and those who live under rules are idiot Commoners to be controlled. Yeah, that’s you. The Fabian Society even has their goals in plain sight & don’t think people are smart enough to figure it out or do anything about it if they did. They know a little money buys people, and that’s how they operate
So the Original Question … how do they put their evil persona on those they have the most need to neutralize? Those who demand the Constitution be followed? (they HATE our Constitution) … they own control over most of the Media, they bought it, & do the same thing with Entertainment. Do you think the Daily show making fun of Democrats in the lose dishonest propagandizing way they do Republicans would be tolerated? HELL NO it wouldn’t, and why? Because they have the tools, the media, the bought officials, and the followers bribed and promised bribes. They have laid down the carpet of propaganda and they have what is basically a cult working of people to whom their political affiliation is the GOOD & the bad things they have to do to support it they see as done to the BAD so they have no moral problem with it. They are just fighting evil in their minds, while duped by the most insidious evil in the world … guys like Soros, Kahn, and those are the
little fish, compared to guys like Rothschild family and Rockefellers
Big punch line? It’s not just other countries, these people run our Federal Reserve Bank and control our economy. Ripping us off in spades all the time, to enrich themselves
Waqas: You there
1). yes i am here
2). Muslims do not greet with “hello”…we say asalaamu alaikum.
wanna give it a try?
Waqas: Assalam u Alaikum
UmmSumaya: oh! walaikum asalaam wr wb brother!
Waqas: so how have you been
UmmSumaya: been good thankyou alhamdulillah.
Waqas: still cleaning ROFL
UmmSumaya:Ramadan Mubarak ROFL nope homework lol
Waqas: you clean a lot
UmmSumaya: I gotta write 315 book summaries
I told you I’m the only child at home haha
Waqas: wow 315 :-O
UmmSumaya: yeah i did 100 yesterday and did 30 within the pass two hours, I hope to finish today if I’m smart
Waqas: your WAAAYYY smarter than me
Waqas: any day
UmmSumaya: nah, i might just apply my self more
Waqas: what do you clean any way
UmmSumaya: my house lol
Waqas: I mean what in the house
UmmSumaya: room, bathroom, kitchen steps, we got 3 living rooms lol
Waqas:KITCHEN STEPS WOW
UmmSumaya: ROFL not kitchen steps, kitchen and the steps
Waqas: your a cleanaholic
UmmSumaya:cuz our steps have like little platforms
UmmSumaya:well i can’t clean during the week cuz i got a lot of homework, so I’m stuck doing it on weekends and I don’t have school today so i think I’m free to do just book summaries due on Thursday.
Waqas:Ever thought of hiring a maid
UmmSumaya: no lol. my mom won’t waste money on a maid when she has a daughter rofl XD
Waqas: but your a kid
UmmSumaya:I’m 17 almost old enough to vote looool, if I’m old enough to pick my own religion and take 7 college classes I’m old enough to clean
Waqas: your a revert?
Waqas:when did it happened
UmmSumaya: I was christian yes and i converted in 2008 January when i was 15
Waqas:how did it happened
UmmSumaya:rofl bro it sounds like your asking me about loosing my legs hehe cuz the way it sounds haha what happened? how? aw man i am so sorry…..rofl
Waqas:how did you became a muslim
Waqas:it’s such a simple question
UmmSumaya:I learned about Islam Ramadan 2007 from sites and hated Islam….then i prayed to Allah and asked for help and was brought to Islam.
Waqas:can you be more explanatory
UmmSumaya:well i asked my friend why she was fasting and she aid its ramadhan, I asked her what it was and she said she has to fast
UmmSumaya:then i was like :-O ur gonna die lol
Waqas:christian fast to
UmmSumaya:and shes like o_o nooooooooo
UmmSumaya:so she explained the difference between Christians and Muslims the whole jesus thing really
UmmSumaya:so that whole day after first period i talked to my christian friends asking them questions about Christianity
Waqas:sounds like a good Muslimah
UmmSumaya:and if I’d go to hell for being Muslim and they were like yeah
UmmSumaya:so then i went home and stayed up til like 3 in the morning doing research on Islam. i found good stuff and bad stuff. that night i declared shahadah. then like the next day, the Christians told e i was going to hell so i “took my shahadah back” rofl
then i said i will just be christian and Muslim. and both the Christians and the Muslim was like wtf are u doing?
UmmSumaya:the thing is i really wanted to fast that month and i didn’t know why so i started fasting and called it “disciplining my body” not ramadhan.
UmmSumaya:then i went and researched more over the week and found so much horrible stuff about Islam i started getting depressed cuz i knew i wanted to follow this religion, but all this info said that Islam is bad, so i started crying myself to sleep.
UmmSumaya:then ran across the story of bill weise and i knew for sure islam was wrong then like i came across a site at about midnight
UmmSumaya:that gives you a free quran
i order the quran that midnight, it came the same day when i got home from school.
UmmSumaya:i took that as one sign and cracked the thing open and started reading. i loved it.
then i started talking to a sister named noor online. she helped alot
UmmSumaya:teaching me about Islam and giving me sites.
UmmSumaya:then i finally in January converted and meant it. alhamdulillah and since then i have had 1 relapse cuz i was stupid. astakfurallah. almost went to Christianity again…..but didn’t omg. and its been a year since then. so its all good
UmmSumaya:the end lol *fatima bows*
UmmSumaya:i have to finish work bb later
Waqas:I’m going to show it in Ramadan section
UmmSumaya:omg ur gonna post my story?
but not now
Waqas:I am going to show your story
UmmSumaya:ok ok Assalam u alaikum
Waqas: walaikum assalam
Allah u Akbar
No she’s not a mom she is only 17 lol and your story WOW
They try to act like they are the good guys when they go and deal with other corrupt governments.. and take advantage of them. Like what’s happening now in Egypt, now they are stuck because the Egyptian government is their strongest ally in the Arab world, so they are actually sticking up for President Mubarak, while at the same time, trying to distance themselves from him because his disapproval is very public right now. What assholes.
I know countries do things that mainly benefit themselves.. but then when they go taking advantage of african nations with lots of oil, and then wonder why people are still poor there, its f***ed up. And its not just America who does it. And then these countries consider themselves “civilized” when they are just as screwy as the others, but in different ways.
Why do humans have to f*** up everything. I am not proud to be an American, or anything else. This doesn’t mean I’m some lunatic who wants America and etc to be bombed, I’m just frustrated because how can I support people who claim to be good when they do a lot of bad things as well? America deserved 9/11 because they spent too much time messing with Middle Eastern affairs that were none of their business. America should spend more time focusing on America, and not trying to fix the world because it just makes things WORSE. and i live in america and there’s lots of things to be fixed here.
the american government has now f***ed up Iraq even more than it was before.. YES that is totally gonna make more people pro-american! bombing innocent victims and what not. smart move, american government. its almost like they want more attacks on america as they just continue to provoke them. people should have their own democracies.. with what THEY think is right, not necessarily what americans want or the people will blame america! hmm i wonder when in history this has happened before. ummm Iran?? and if i know this as a 17 year old then wouldn’t the people making those big decisions know all about it and more? what has america gained from the war on terror? can this war even end? people generally turn to the extremist groups when their basic needs aren’t met.. when they need money to support their families and etc. when they cant get education, too
why does history keep f***ing repeating itself, dammit
@Brianna Mcintosh: America isn’t interfering with Egypt as they did with Iraq because America doesn’t want to lose their best ally in the Arab world. I find it funny how you clearly have poor reading comprehension as I have said in my OP that I was American. And its funny how you’re saying that other countries should fix their own messes, when America CHOOSES to go and interfere with other nations. The US is not the Arab world’s nanny, though they try to give the impression of that, when they really are just trying to take advantage of them.
@ Entropy: What you said makes a lot of sense, but why does America keep funding Israel, then? The Jews left, so the Palestinians went to those lands. And then the Jews came back after the Holocaust, but the Palestinians were still there and didn’t want to give up the land. And then now Israel has been given so much power, and is now trying to take land away from the Palestinians. Both countries generally don’t want each other to exist. When I see it this way, the Jews seem to be more of the bad guys since the Palestinians are just trying to keep the land they got once the Jews left. If anything, Germany should be funding Israel for what they did to the jews, and America should fund black people for the hundreds of years of slavery. What does America owe to European Jews? They already fought WW2 for them.It’s like the Jews are better than everyone else or something.
Is it just me or is Mubarak the most attractive, hottest, downright SEXIEST political figure the past century? Puppy dog eyes, light brown creamy skin, that fearless leader mentality and confidence. Mmm. Not to mention his brains – by far one of – if not THE smartest person alive today. As a straight male, I can confidently and fearlessly say: milk did that body good. I’d rub those nipples and have my way with him if I got the chance. I’m already batting my eyelashes; Muba baby got stank.
Should we twitter each other?
America’s way of protesting is to go to a local bar, get drunk, and complain to anyone who will listen. Or we talk it over at dinner telling each other how “we” would run the country if left in charge.
Hey! Wake up call! not gonna happen.
Also: how many sick days to Egyptians have? Do they take breaks to eat during the rioting? Instead of “sick days” do they phone their boss with a “riot day”?
Can somebody break down what is going on in Egypt? What starting the protest
I’ve been watching the news, reading news articles & watching videos online
But I haven’t grasped what started everything okay thanks
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